With all the problem in hand, Dainna and Victor still close and didn't affected their relationship. notwithstanding, their more closer and spent so much time together. their have chemistry and get along well. it is seem that nothing can't stop them. They in love.....
One day..
Dainna invited him to join her friends birthday party. it was held on the beach. that time they were very happy and Dainna seem to like Victor so much.same goes with Victor ;). They took a bus heading back to collage. They sat behind, while holding each other hand and she laying her head on my shoulder. i never thought that we will like this...
from that moment, they texting vigorously. every day, every night. Dainna cant hold her feeling towards Victor. and Victor show go respond to Dainna. one day, they texting each others. it is the started of long journey of "Vicna" life.
"i love victor so much"-Dainna's text to Victor
"i love Dainna so much too"- replied victor
in the night they revealed each others feeling thru texting...
Dainna invited him to join her friends birthday party. it was held on the beach. that time they were very happy and Dainna seem to like Victor so much.same goes with Victor ;). They took a bus heading back to collage. They sat behind, while holding each other hand and she laying her head on my shoulder. i never thought that we will like this...
from that moment, they texting vigorously. every day, every night. Dainna cant hold her feeling towards Victor. and Victor show go respond to Dainna. one day, they texting each others. it is the started of long journey of "Vicna" life.
"i love victor so much"-Dainna's text to Victor
"i love Dainna so much too"- replied victor
in the night they revealed each others feeling thru texting...
Dear Mr Author,
ReplyDeleteBy reading this one make me impress (terror jgk ek!)...u have a talent in writting rupe nyer...this is a good try to be a novelist one day....(^-^)
Just a few things that u need to improved in term of story line...nextime try to extend further the story scope by create different situation and try to come with variety characters...so it can make the story more longer...
By the way, keep up your good work...don't stop writting....keep on writting so that u be more creative and at the same time u can improve your writting skill....
Truly deeply,
(*-*)...
i can't wait for the ending.....
ReplyDeletefaster....post it!!!
actually, i just write by heart... it is my will to do this before its too late... i admitted, the story line is not good as if the pro but i will improve it time to time. i will cont the story asap after i finished my proposal.
ReplyDeletethanks 4 the comment..
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Dun take it in deep ur heart k...Learning is continious process...I know is come from ur heart...it's like when we wrote a diary...what we wrote can be adapted to novel sometimes....hehehhe...
ReplyDeleteChaiyok...Chaiyok!!!!!